Well done Salma! I really like your writing. The problem is that you never used much feelings for your character. Other than that your writing is really good. đ
Wow, Year 6, what wonderful writing. Learning about WW2 is a really interesting thing and I can see that you have all learnt so much already. You have included so much detail and feeling in your writing that it is hard to believe that you weren’t actually there. Keep up the excellent work. As for ‘writer of the week’, honestly, I think I would give it to Jonan!
Well done Emeka, I really enjoyed reading this time travel story (like that story I used to read to you, Kipper and that dog with the key) because it felt like the atmosphere was really around me. Much better than having say that I was just in WW2 you have shown objects about it so 11/10. Even though you have wrote an excellent piece of writing it hasn’t been the best it can be, so challenge yourself to be better than what you can do so achieve a higher level than 4-5.
Good Job! Emeka’s Sister
With regards to the Big write. I felt Tia’s ideas were very good. I could picture myself there. However she needs to read though her work and check her spellings using a dictionary.
Everyone did so well. đ
Salma you doing so well! From uncle Issa đ
Salma I really enjoyed reading your story(but I did notice that you never used much feelings).Well done
From mum đ :D:D
Well done Salma! I really like your writing. The problem is that you never used much feelings for your character. Other than that your writing is really good. đ
From mum
Very well, I am so proud of you Abdul.
Well done everybody.
I honestly think Leoner should be the writer of the week because tried her hardest. đ
I think it should bĂŠ everyone!! ;D đ đ đ
I agree.:D
Yeah, I now do think the writer of the week should be everyone.
This is Elsie’s dad i really liked yours Elsie and Salma!!! Keep it up!
Wow, Year 6, what wonderful writing. Learning about WW2 is a really interesting thing and I can see that you have all learnt so much already. You have included so much detail and feeling in your writing that it is hard to believe that you weren’t actually there. Keep up the excellent work. As for ‘writer of the week’, honestly, I think I would give it to Jonan!
Well done Toibat. It would be even better if you presented your work in a clear and neat manner.
Could we please have a mathematician of the week? đ
Great idea. How could we decide?
Well you could decide who has been the best student in class during maths.Or you could choose the way you choose the writer of the week.
I liked everyone’s work.
Well done Year 6.
I know you re working hard, guys, but this will pay off, you ll see! Keep it up! Mrs T
Good work everyone.
Nice work maxxwell .
Good Maxxwell , you did a good big write.
I agree with you Kalo and Rico! đ
Thanks.
Nice work people.
Everyone did well.
Brilliant work Jonan you deserve the writer of the week. ;D
Well done Emeka, I really enjoyed reading this time travel story (like that story I used to read to you, Kipper and that dog with the key) because it felt like the atmosphere was really around me. Much better than having say that I was just in WW2 you have shown objects about it so 11/10. Even though you have wrote an excellent piece of writing it hasn’t been the best it can be, so challenge yourself to be better than what you can do so achieve a higher level than 4-5.
Good Job! Emeka’s Sister
Fantastic work Year 6, I am very impressed!
Now I think Joann should be writer of the week, he had so much tension and it was amazing!!
Sorry Jonan I spelt your name wrong it was a spelling error.
With regards to the Big write. I felt Tia’s ideas were very good. I could picture myself there. However she needs to read though her work and check her spellings using a dictionary.
Well written and emotive piece of work well done son.