What a wonderful collection of poems and a great tribute for Remeberance Sunday. You all have reminded me of the great sacrifice that was made for all of us. Thank you everyone in Wolves.
I was taken aback whilst reading my daughter’s poem about Poppies for Remembrance Day!
I actually asked her if she had copied it from somewhere as I was very impressed by it.
Great work Michaela!! The depth of your poem is beyond your years!
Ever so proud 🙂
I was very impressed by all your poems and how you all understood both the horror of war and that the soldiers were willing to risk dying or being injured so people like us could live in freedom 100 years later. If you go to Flanders you will be able to see how close the English and German trenches were to each other and you will wonder that anyone survived. Also don’t forget all the sailors both on the battleships and the cargo boats who died bringing food to us and the the men flying the early fighters.
I am so proud of these poems. I have read every one and really could not make the decision about who should be writer of the week. Every poem demonstrates an understanding of the horror of war but also a tenderness for those who died and for those who were left behind. Well done to everyone. You should all be proud of your achievements.
Well done Emeka, what a brilliant poem. You took time to think about the poem word by word. You also made it rhyme and it is quite hard to find rhyming words in a poem like this, so you just changed it and made it your own.
Emeka’s Mum
Salma I really like the way you made the first two lines so powerful. I definitely would want there to be a second part to this!!! I really liked when you said ‘I can be depressed, close my eyes full of tears’.
Sophia I really liked the first verse of yours especially the end when it said ‘if we all want peace, why don’t wars end?’ That really makes me understand the first verse. Well done Sophia,keep it up!!
Very good emeka many people to day still forget that they sacrifice there lives for our freedom.Your poem made me even more thankful for what the soldiers done many years ago.
I really like the way you used the She Waits poem for your base Oliver. The ending verse really brought title and poem out. The repetition at the end was really nice.’So he waits, and waits, and waits.
Your poem was really good with repetition Nathan.The way I would improve it is to describe the poppies more effectively like the poppies where covered in blood whilst British men battled the German.
What a wonderful collection of poems and a great tribute for Remeberance Sunday. You all have reminded me of the great sacrifice that was made for all of us. Thank you everyone in Wolves.
Well done Salma ! I am really proud of you! Keep up the good wok year 6
I was taken aback whilst reading my daughter’s poem about Poppies for Remembrance Day!
I actually asked her if she had copied it from somewhere as I was very impressed by it.
Great work Michaela!! The depth of your poem is beyond your years!
Ever so proud 🙂
We’ll done every one.
I love everyone work .
I was very impressed by all your poems and how you all understood both the horror of war and that the soldiers were willing to risk dying or being injured so people like us could live in freedom 100 years later. If you go to Flanders you will be able to see how close the English and German trenches were to each other and you will wonder that anyone survived. Also don’t forget all the sailors both on the battleships and the cargo boats who died bringing food to us and the the men flying the early fighters.
I am so proud of these poems. I have read every one and really could not make the decision about who should be writer of the week. Every poem demonstrates an understanding of the horror of war but also a tenderness for those who died and for those who were left behind. Well done to everyone. You should all be proud of your achievements.
I was blown away with your poems today, very inspirational and emotional. A fantastic way to remember our soliders. Well done Year 6.
Maxxwell, you have done so well on your big write but try to put more effective images in the readers head.:). Youssef.H
You are definitely improving guys!! 🙂
Maxxwell your poem was awesome I also liked your repetition
Wow maxwell your repetition is so affective well done 🙂
Wow your repetition is so affective maxwell
Really moving. Well done Tia!!
I really liked your repetition Maxxwell
To maxxxxwell
I love your writing you put really powerfull words in there. You really put effect on the reader.
Awesome work guys 🙂
Well done Emeka, what a brilliant poem. You took time to think about the poem word by word. You also made it rhyme and it is quite hard to find rhyming words in a poem like this, so you just changed it and made it your own.
Emeka’s Mum
Sophia I agree with you I really really really really really really love your work 🙂
I really liked the way you all put the effect in my head. Especially when it came to the second verse it became so tense!!
Salma I really like the way you made the first two lines so powerful. I definitely would want there to be a second part to this!!! I really liked when you said ‘I can be depressed, close my eyes full of tears’.
Sophia I really liked the first verse of yours especially the end when it said ‘if we all want peace, why don’t wars end?’ That really makes me understand the first verse. Well done Sophia,keep it up!!
Very good emeka many people to day still forget that they sacrifice there lives for our freedom.Your poem made me even more thankful for what the soldiers done many years ago.
Well done Edward your writing is amazing.
I really like the way you used the She Waits poem for your base Oliver. The ending verse really brought title and poem out. The repetition at the end was really nice.’So he waits, and waits, and waits.
Tia, I thought your poem was wonderful
Emeka your writing is butiful it really made me think
Salma, I really like your poem! If you keep praticing you will get really good
I really liked your use of repetition but you need to read through your work to make sure that it is not boring.
Maxwell I really like your poem keep it up good work.
Your poem was really good with repetition Nathan.The way I would improve it is to describe the poppies more effectively like the poppies where covered in blood whilst British men battled the German.