my hero

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8 Responses to my hero

  1. Jason F says:

    Corrections: capital I, succeed, believe
    You have not included any punctuation. It is very hard to read.

  2. Elsie says:

    Really nice writng!!!! I love it!!!!!!

  3. andreea says:

    Hi guys.

  4. J-Leigh O says:

    Thank you Elsie 🙂 .

  5. Eddyz says:

    Mine is Cristiano Ronaldo.

  6. Elsie says:

    You’re welcome J-Leigh! 😀

  7. Mum says:

    Hey my beauty, you got a few spelling errors there princess.
    Keep up the good work. I love you Squeezy x

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