Maxxwell,Edward and Rico, i really enjoyed you guys writing you tried so hard you guys really deserve somthing! 😀 😀 😀 You boys made your writing so descriptive!!!!!!! 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 :D. Now i put punctuaiton you can delete the other one no punctuation.
Well done Sophia I really like your work!
Thank you Mayomi.
Sophia’s writing was really enjoyable.
Well done Olivia I really enjoyed reading you story.
Thanks Salma! 🙂
I like your work Michaela! It had a lot of tension.
Thank you Rumman. 😀
Your work was great J-Leigh! A few things you can improve on was spelling mistakes.
Thank you Rumman .
We really liked your handwriting Maxxwell.
We’ll done Youssef on your writing it was very tense and exciting,
but there were some spelling mistakes – still it was very good.
We love your tiny little writing and your writing is so interesting!:D
Keir great writing.
Nice handwriting Keir.
OH MY GOD! Emeka’s writing is really good! :O
Good job Youssef
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Nice J-Leigh!
Katie your work is interesting, but you should try to see what you write in future. You used a brilliant range of descriptive words. 🙂
Thanks Elsie and Toibat.
No problem!!
Oliver I really like your punctuation .
Good job Youssef. 😀
The handwriting is good, so is the vocabulary. The stories are great and are kind of scary.
Good work Katie your story was very interesting and mysterious.
Toibat and Jonan – well done! Your writing is incredible!
We’ll done Riyad!!
Your handwriting is awesome Kalo.
Thank you Elsie and Toibat 🙂
Well done Salam.
Elsie – I love your work – it is incredible.
Brilliant writing Maxxwell. You have neat and descriptive writing.
Thanks a lot J-Leigh that means a lot. You are so sweet! 😀 😀
I love the way you tryed to make it intresting J-Leigh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀
Brilliant handwriting Maxxwell. You have good use of descriptive words.
Nice neat writing Rico it looks like you made a huge effort.
Nice Writing Sophia.
Maxxwell,Edward and Rico, i really enjoyed you guys writing you tried so hard you guys really deserve somthing! 😀 😀 😀 You boys made your writing so descriptive!!!!!!! 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀 :D. Now i put punctuaiton you can delete the other one no punctuation.
Notice the correct way to spell “something”. You missed out an e.
The video makes me feel like someone is getting revenge. When it says “ahh I’ve been expecting you!”
Nice work only
Thankkkkkk you Salma!
I really like everyone’s writing.
I agree Toibat!
Well done everyone!