Wow, what fab description! I like how you have used adjectives and onomatopoeia. I think I’m going to have to watch the latest Thor movie tonight.
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I love your work Leon.
Very nice handwriting [T]yrese.
Anya i like the you make the reader understand and i really like your work.
I really like this writing because it makes me feel like I am there.
Wow,what fab writing! Good punctuation especially the full stops!
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Wow, what fab description! I like how you have used adjectives and onomatopoeia. I think I’m going to have to watch the latest Thor movie tonight.
Dillon I was really starting to enjoy your story, but I could not see the rest of the work. From mum
I love your work Leon.
Very nice handwriting [T]yrese.
Anya i like the you make the reader understand and i really like your work.
I really like this writing because it makes me feel like I am there.
Wow,what fab writing! Good punctuation especially the full stops!